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Hello all,

I hope you guys are having a great start to this amazing week! I wasn’t able to write a post for Monday and Tuesday, but I’ve promised myself to be more regular. So here’s my 3rd story for the Five Photos, Five Stories Challenge.


Today’s Describli promo is Fear (A Ridiculous Fear) and here’s my story for it:

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This is not the prompt’s featured pic. But I like this one better, so I’m using this instead of the featured one.

It

I took a right turn and came to a sudden stop. I saw it looking at it’sprey. Black eyes bulging out and shining like thick lustrous black liquid. Skin reflecting the light of the setting sun like silk. It’s giant tail doing a sensual dance and it’s breathing dangerously calm.

It stood towering over it’s prey like a mountain in front of an ant. The pray was trembling, crying and begging for mercy. “Please, please let me go. I’ll never return to your territory again! I promise. Please, just let me go this time and I promise I’ll never disturb you again!”

I stood there frozen, seeing the intense exchange of emotions between a weak prey and a giant monster. I saw it move towards it’s prey with the grace of a water dancer. It moved it’s giant body like a huge snake. Stalking it’s tiny prey with hungry eyes and enjoying his helpless state.

I was drenched in sweat and my hands and legs started to shake. I wanted to run away from it and it’s unfortunate prey, but I was so shocked that I wasn’t able to find it in me to turn away and run. I took an unsteady step backwards and my sneaker squeaked.

It twisted it’s head ever so quickly that it might have been in less than a mili second.

The moment it’s eyes met mine, my legs started to melt like melting wax and my heart leaped to my throat. I let out an ungraceful sound from deep within the pit of my stomach, something like an animal cry, and it responded to my cry with a tiny tilt of it’s head. I was standing shocked still and was just waiting for it to turn to me and end my life but then it jumped and ran like I was going to eat it raw. For a second I did not understand what happened and then I heard my little sister laugh. I turned and looked at her.

She was giggling and said in a sing song voice: “Anna is scared of Lizard! Anna is scared of Lizard!”

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16 responses to “It”

  1. Dagny Avatar

    That’s cute, Heena. I enjoyed this little story.

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    1. Heena Rathore P. Avatar

      Thanks a lot Dagny! The theme was A Ridiculous Fear… So, I hope the last line made it enough ridiculous! 🙂

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      1. Dagny Avatar

        It did. I was already laughing as soon as I read “it jumped and ran like I was going to eat it raw.” Great line.

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  2. The V-Pub Avatar
    The V-Pub

    It was a great build up! I was expecting a terrible ending, but I smiled instead. I loved it!

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    1. Heena Rathore P. Avatar

      Hehe! Thanks a lot Rob 🙂 I hope I was able to keep the “ridiculous fear” part of the prompt alive with my last line 😉

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  3. Galit Balli Avatar

    Nice story hun and a bit of a surprise at the end ❤

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    1. Heena Rathore P. Avatar

      Thanks a lot sweetie! Yep, I love when just a single line at the end changes the entire story… hehe! 😀

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      1. Galit Balli Avatar

        Yeah, that was a wonderful writing style 😀

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  4. tonyasmithauthor Avatar

    You really got me in the end Heena. Cute story!

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    1. Heena Rathore P. Avatar

      Thanks a lot Tony! 🙂

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  5. Erika Kind Avatar

    Haha, wonderful, Heena! Really, wonderful. I love those stories where the last sentence turns everything around! Big compliment. Thrilling story and wonderful unexpected and funny ending!

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    1. Heena Rathore P. Avatar

      Thanks a lot Erika ❤ I also enjoy writing such stories where the last sentence literally changes everything! hehe! 🙂

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  6. phoenixgrey85 Avatar
    phoenixgrey85

    Great twist. Made me smile. 🙂 It’s nice to read your writing. Keep going with it.

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  7. mihrank Avatar

    creative, fun story – enjoyed reading it!

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    1. Heena Rathore P. Avatar

      Thanks a lot Mihran! 🙂

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